Like the title says these are as much about the ramblings of a mad prophet, as they are such ramblings or rumbling utterances themselves.

Image Source Abstract Image 181 by Bill M. Tracer

I listen to the ramblings of a mad prophet, and wonder from wince his words come.

Are they inspired by Holy origins, or derived more from a psychedelic source?

Could his visions have a basis as much psychotic as divine?

Is there ultimately any real difference?

His rumbling utterances give the impression more of randomness than of order,

Yet in the chaos of his expressions insanity and genius intermingle.

The fine line alleged to separate these weaves to and fro and round about,

Thus making their separation nearly impossible, if one should even try.

In their midst the embers of a concept escalates like an egg of new life.

Out of which will grow a new directive obscuring an innovative thought form,

Or as likely blossom into an anti-progressive degradation.

Its deceptive warm glow could lead us down a confused myopic path.

If we dare see the distinction, needs be we point it out.

And if that notion be taken to its inevitable conclusion,

Will the same mad prophet declare us heretic, blasphemer, demon spawn?

Or could the psychedelic take us to a brighter place of enchanted enlightenment?

Image Source Abstract Image 163 by Bill M. Tracer

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Comments (16)
  • Debra. on Apr 18, 2009

    A disturbingly, deeply profound piece of work! A very entertaining read.

  • C Jordan on Apr 18, 2009

    I think I just about followed that. :)

  • Joe Dorish on Apr 18, 2009

    Interesting to be sure.

  • lindalulu on Apr 18, 2009

    Great and interesting article.

  • California Dreamer on Apr 18, 2009

    Was a interesting article to read :)

  • maranatha on Apr 18, 2009

    I had to read that like three times…. But I like!

  • George W Whitehead on Apr 18, 2009

    Cool man!

  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Apr 18, 2009

    very dep read very cool and full of interesting thoughts

  • Vicki Marsh on Apr 18, 2009

    Again another alarmingly brilliant use of words in a very descriptive piece

  • SZM on Apr 18, 2009

    Don’t play with the word “prophet”!

  • Bill M. Tracer on Apr 18, 2009

    I disagree, SZM. All words are available to play with. That’s part of the purpose of words, for both play and work.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 19, 2009

    I like your ramblings!

  • CutestPrincess on May 9, 2009

    interesting subjects…. well done!

  • MandoV on May 10, 2009

    :O What to say when two crazies ramble and understand each other…

  • alc on Aug 1, 2009

    very interesting and unusual, but I liked it very much!!

  • Sarah Brisco on Aug 6, 2009

    Thanks for the read!

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