It is what happens when you get hit by a really bad storm but( it isn’t a real life story) or when you have a great imagination.

It began on the 6Th of November 2010  we had just gotten the news that a tropical storm named Tomas was headed right towards up, so i decided to quickly got the materials that i needed to make sure that my house is secured, so i headed to the shop next door to get them but the said they didn’t have any, so after I a darkness come over  so i hurried back into my house hoping that my house would not get hit. When the storm began I looked out of my bed room window and saw that the wind had a cow and a big billy goat in the air floating about. And a farmer running after them, Then I heard the sound of two metal hitting together I started to get scared, and when I looked back out the window the top of my neighbours house was getting riped apart, so i got my phone and call my neighbours house to see if anyone was home, but got no answer. After a while the whole roof came and and was only resting on my house and I left a sudden hit  the roof had hit onto mine, and I quickly asked myself what to do. If to go to a hurricane shelter or to stay here and hope for the best. Them i heard a load noise and saw my piece of my neighbours wall resting on the roof that was resting on my house, so i said to my self that if I don’t leave here my whole house is going to fall down, so I quickly got together some stuff that I would carry with me my when i go to the hurricane shelter, so i packed the most important stuff that I would need and I got into my car, and started to drive, as I drove I saw people houses and garbage cans flying around in the air and trees were bowing and electricity polls where block the roads, so as soon as I got to the shelter I went and got myself in a spot because I saw that a lot of other people where coming and in the room was getting crowded and I sat with some other people and we shared stories about their homes and what the storm had done to them and when we were finished we ate and shared it with the people who were i a hurry and didn’t take any food with them, time passed really fast and before long the rain and stop but there were still high winds, so we opened the windows, so we could get some air before the rain started back again, before we could get out side the rain had begun to fall again, and i got really mad because we were running out of food and because we were all close together and didn’t have much space to move around, after our last bit of food was gone I looked outside the window and the storm was finished and the sun was just getting ready to come out, and the next thing we did was to thank everyone for sharing their food and stories with us them everyone left hoping that their houses wasn’t damaged to badly.

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Comments (29)
  • awesome11 on Nov 28, 2010

    Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Canadamom on Jun 29, 2011

    This is a good write up.

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 29, 2011

    interesting story indeed, it is very neat,thanks for sharing this my friend

  • Mr. Asad Ali on Jun 29, 2011

    Awesome content dude…… Keep it up!!!.

  • tonyleather on Jun 29, 2011

    Amazing story. Cheers.

  • Pins Magee on Jun 29, 2011

    this is pretty intense and a good read. Thanks for posting it.

  • R K Vajpeyi on Jun 29, 2011

    Nice one about the storm

  • srbasu on Jun 29, 2011

    Very nice Information Thanks for sharing.

  • mspitot on Jun 30, 2011

    Nice write up…typhoons are common in our country.

  • LTStajul on Jun 30, 2011

    nice writer up.

  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 30, 2011

    Beautifully written dear

  • LoVeMy11 on Jun 30, 2011

    good job

  • ykost77 on Jun 30, 2011

    good work

  • Percy Omenazu on Jun 30, 2011

    I have been here and it is good. Keep it up…

  • Redfiery on Jun 30, 2011

    I got shivers,,,,this is interesting but i know how does it feels…thanks for sharing and i really read the lines….!

  • bobbyc on Jun 30, 2011

    Really good story. Thanks for sharing it.

  • Minister Marlene on Jun 30, 2011

    The best part was sharing food with all and being safe.

  • Wherner5 on Jul 1, 2011

    Nice share

  • SamThePoet on Jul 1, 2011

    It reminded me of the real storm once I had faced :) nice..

  • Kaos13 on Jul 1, 2011

    Well Done

  • gaby7 on Jul 1, 2011

    This was truly deadly!

  • begundalkecil on Jul 1, 2011

    great post :)

  • juliachild on Jul 1, 2011

    Nice write

  • Peace Poet on Jul 3, 2011

    Very well-written and interesting article. Thanks for sharing.

  • JoniJones on Jul 4, 2011

    Good writing

  • Baijayanti Pradhan on Jul 4, 2011

    Nice share.

  • Rosy35 on Jul 4, 2011

    great share

  • Dreamy777 on Jul 4, 2011

    great one thanks

  • Netty net on Apr 5, 2012

    Wow it must of been some storm, having cows and goats flying in air.

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