What is this feeling of a melanalcoholic man?

yuck what is this feeling of a
melanalcoholic man-(he is d(one)
with life
and joins unspoken Brahman)
who’s gait is unsure
as he walks among men
(more) Civilized
(than) him, He
(needed) a new
(life-) that Is Where? that is
(overindulgent)
nowhere special however
no- he can(not) leave
with(out) his dignity

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  • nutuba on Feb 20, 2009

    Deep! I’ll need to think about this some more. It’s beautiful and thought-provoking. I used to program in Lisp (with all the parentheses) and I was reminded of that. :-)

  • Darren Goad on Mar 1, 2009

    It is indeed thought provoking. Clever structure.

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