The epitome of romance.

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Amazing eyes and warm smile,
with gentle hands of an artist.
Words held before spoken,
soothe and calm my pulse.
The sunset entertains
in a brilliant invitation
for tender moments.
My knees are weak,
but my lips are bold,
suspended in the bliss
of his passionate kiss…

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  • okkhattak on Feb 7, 2012

    Excellent Thanks.

  • Prometheus Ridley Scott on Feb 8, 2012

    Cool.

  • avissado on Feb 8, 2012

    very nice

  • avissado on Feb 8, 2012

    very nice

  • clay hurtubise on Feb 8, 2012

    You weren’t suppose to tell anyone about us!
    Nice piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Linda Lori on Feb 8, 2012

    :) It’s okay, Clay..I didn’t mention your name, so nobody knows it’s you.. lol :)

  • BANASCO on Feb 8, 2012

    keep it up!!!!

  • Boyka on Feb 10, 2012

    I Like It

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 15, 2012

    You say a lot with so little. Another nice one.

  • Zappy on Mar 6, 2012

    Linda Lori
    Out Standing!

    KISS…

    Zappy

  • yes me on Mar 13, 2012

    My sable brush, could not express the hues ,you have in this warm ode, liked it Linda cheers

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