This was written by me on a rainy day at a mcdonalds while I was trying to kill a few hours with only a coke as my company. Hope you like it!

            She shivered as he approached. The glint in his eyes did nothing but aggravate her uneasiness. The anticipation, sigh, was going to ruin her. She never was one for being patient.

            She trembled some more as he touched her. Goosebumps arose over her as he slipped her sleeve off her arm.

He smiled yet another not-so-reassuring smile.

            How could he be so calm and reassuring while she felt as though she was going to burst in flames and melt at the same time?

‘Just relax, I promise it wont hurt’ , her whimper was the only response to yet another of his attempts to calm her.

            He closed in the remaining distance between them.

This is it, she thought as he tightened his grip on her arm. She bit down on her lip to stop from screaming as he entered it inside of her.

‘You can open your eyes now. It’s done’.

            Surprised, she opened her eyes slowly, breathless. She took a few gulps of air in. Looking around she saw him standing with it in hands.

‘I told you it won’t hurt’. he chuckled.

            She smiled at him for the first time since meeting him and said, ‘Thanks for the injection, doctor’.

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  • crucisis on Jul 18, 2010

    thats a good one :)

  • Puja on Jul 18, 2010

    Thank you!

  • Syed Ali Raza Naqvi on Mar 27, 2011

    very unique!

  • sanataryal on Apr 6, 2011

    Puja,you have great potential to write.Keep your spirit up.

  • metro7 on Feb 1, 2012

    hi puja nice write thnxs

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