This is a suicide note.

How many versions of a suicide note should there be? Why does someone do what they do? A poem.

I have been to church. Your church is not the only church. You do not make the rules. You are stupid.

I love my family. Do you know my family. I know about Mother T.

I like India. Do you know about India. They are VERY nice people. (Yes, ALL OF THEM, I think…)

Do you know how to tell a story? I like to tell stories. (Wait…this is suspense…)

To suspend: to hold up or to make wait…

(ok…)

Weight: what holds you down.

Poem: this one.

The word is LOVE and it is underlined THREE times. I have seen a note. It was fake. Who is the liar?

What does custody mean? 

Custody: “I WILL KEEP IT”.

Who is doing the keeping: NOT ME.

Who asked for it? ME.

Who has it? DEAD.

See, I told you so.

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