Wherever and whenever the Undying Singer goes, he causes change without changing himself. Can he help a leader used to believing in his people’s, culture’s and kingdom’s superiority appreciate the gifts of others?

“You have been well-briefed.”

“The transmission by your Ministry of War was quite thorough.” Never mind that I had the chance to cherry-pick from dozens of minds as the Need of the Hour granted me after we arrived here…

“Yet one thing we lack,” said the Guotin, “and that is a Heavenly Emperor to lead us: an Archon as Hegemon, or else the very Hooded Man who sent us here. You are called the Herald of the Hooded Man; He sent you here in response to our Emperor’s query. Tell me, what would happen to our Kingdom now if your Kingdom annexed it?”

“Well, for one thing,” and here the Undying Singer’s speech became both colloquial and rather chiding, “you’d have to stop eating everything that swims, crawls, flies or walks.” Alain gestured significantly at his plate on the low table between them, which had held a chicken-based dish, and at the Guotin’s plate, which had held a pork-based dish. “This tea is marvelous, but have you ever asked yourselves why you drink so much of it?” When Sying looked astonished at Alain’s frankness, the latter went on, “It’s because the tea has to counteract the toxins in the meat you eat. We Adamim aren’t like the Bruins – I gather your people remember them? Well, simply because we can eat anything they eat doesn’t mean we should. We’re not designed to do that. They are.”

Before the Guotin could frame a reply, the alarm for general quarters sounded: five gongs of what sounded like a deep brass bell in a row. There was a pause, and then a repeat. And another.

Sying had his slip-on sandals on in seconds, and fastened in seconds after that. Alain had his Starblade and scabbard girded over his jacket before the second series of gongs was over. The third series rang in the corridor outside as the Guotin and the Undying Singer passed into it.

“Hold on, Guotin,” Alain shouted. Once his host had stopped and turned, the power of the Locus’ Ring brought both men instantaneously to the bridge.

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  • Yisraela on Dec 3, 2011

    Well here we are again. I am uncertain if this is what you have decided to write from or if it is an uncertain yet. I love science fiction and the interstellar types of fiction as you write. This seemed more down to business, where other writings of the past several months were business with a fun, soft and human side. Don’t know if I am making sense to you. I see the spiritual parallels you have added. I hope you will include the everyday side of human behavior as well. It makes for more fun and easy reading and interacting. They say sometimes less is more, and I hope you can write less complicated. You write well and with much detail. But in processing everything you often include in your writings, it causes me to get bogged down. And I don’t often understand who or what some of these characters are like. Like, what is Guotin? If you had to describe them. It leaves not knowing. And Sying? Is that just his name or his type of tribe or person? I hope this doesn’t offend. I was just left with more questions than I have had with other chapters. It doesn’t mean it isn’t good otherwise. For those who love simplicity in writing, I was distracted. Whereas, with the other chapters with Alain and Autumn and those stories you wrote, there was humaness and a simple quality that made reading it and being a part of it, easy. Maybe this will be too.
    Good luck with it and know I am rooting for you.
    Yisraela

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