Being homesick next door.

 

Weeks went by and we never heard anything from our parents. We never knew if grandma hid away letters or if they were never written. We kids would eat our dinner in silence and count the days. But they seemed endless!

 

Grandma really took care of us and saw to it that we had proper meals. So we always would have some kind of dessert. So one day we had rice pudding. Big Sister and I didn’t have a nice day at school; we were not in the best of moods. And rice pudding was not really one of our favourites.

Together we were sitting at the table, listening to songs about a poor person who stole a bread for his hungry family and then died in prison. The next song was about a few kids that were left in the woods to starve by their poor parents.

 

Big Sister had tears in her eyes and said that she thought grandma hated us. Why else would she give dessert to us with mucus in it. I must have put on big eyes, so she showed me. She put her spoon in it and lifted it a bit above the pudding. The content of the spoon really came off in a slimy form! We both looked at it in disgust. Big Sister suspected more: they will leave us over here forever! We will never see Mama, Papa and the little girls again!

 

Tears were filling her eyes and I started to sob too. Soon we both were crying our eyes out and the tears were dripping on our plates. Grandma came in and silently took our plates away. When she came back she send us to bed.

 

Through the thin walls of the bedroom I could hear my sister crying till I fell asleep.

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  • Yvonne B on Feb 10, 2010

    What a shame your parents did not realize how they should have been more open with you about their plans…….so sad! Maybe your grandma was even a little scared that something would go wrong and she would have to raise 2 more kids, something that might have scared her. Living so close to her child’s family and then they left “so far away” for her sake too I hope they wrote. Man, thank God for the phone and computer!!
    What a sad story, well written, my heart went out to you and your sister!

  • Debbie on Feb 10, 2010

    I want more!! Great storyline..it was very touching. I think it may be a prologue to a book???

  • Froukje on Feb 11, 2010

    Maybe I must recognize this story, but I do not.
    I feel sorry for the kids. I did live there too, you know.
    Sad story, sorry.

  • vandersjo on Feb 11, 2010

    The story made me cry!
    It’s a sad story.
    But it’s wel written and i hope it’s not a true story.

  • Gea on Feb 11, 2010

    You forgot to mention I was blamed for making you cry.
    Ah well, we got over it.

    But it was a hard time for all of us.
    Grandma was used to having us next door.
    Havermout was never one of our favorites; I think it is kind of like oatmeal here, but oatmeal is never slimey in the USA.

    I was so homesick, it was an awful feeling.

  • Albert van der Steeg on Feb 11, 2010

    This is the writer of this piece:
    I must express again that this is a story. Some ingredients may really have happened but still: my thumb is thick.

  • Sheri on Feb 11, 2010

    Albert,
    I am addicted to your writings! I can’t wait for more! You are so talented.
    More, more, more, please!!

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