Chapter One: The Empty Grave: Part 4

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The woman with no name made it to her destination through the brutal city she barely recollected. Memory flashes tortured her mind. Fleeting things like faces, names and feelings flooded her mind, but no real substantial memories.

“Why can’t I remember?” she screamed out in her mind.

Still, she went on… to that place. A setting that haunted her dreams night after night. A feeling of reaching out for something. It was so close but so far away.

Her eyes fixated on the gray stone where so many people gathered the day before. Now, it lay barren. She saw the writing on the marker: MARIANNA FAIGON: OUR DARK ANGEL OF LIGHT. What did it mean?

“Who are you?” she asked. A question she felt she knew, but she could not reach the answer. “Somehow, I know you. Somehow, I feel you’re not really there underneath that dirt. It’s just a body after all. The suite we are given in this masquerade of life. Call out to me, Marianna. Tell me.”

Hearing footsteps, the stranger ran towards a tree in the hopes of finding a place to hide. A girl approached. She was frightened of being discovered. Somewhere in her subconscious, she did not wish to know her true self, even from those who may have the answers.

“I miss you, Fanta,” the girl said. “I wish I could see you one last time, so I could tell you…”

She stayed hidden, but emotions overwhelmed her as the girl continued. “Why did you have to die? Please, tell me. So may people loved you, Fanta. Reese, Dawn, old man Drell. He doesn’t show it, but this is tearing him apart. And Dusk, he still think you’re alive, some feeling he says. I wish he was right. Oh, how I wish it were true.” The girl dried her eyes with her hands and looked up to the sky. “Goodbye, Fanta, sleep well.”

As the girl attempted to leave the sight and hike back down the hill, the nameless stranger came out of hiding, sure the girl didn’t see her.

The girl turned to see her walking into the shadowed forest. “Fanta,” she whispered. She kept walking away not wanting to face the girl. “Wait! It’s Millie. Don’t go.”

Millie’s went ghost white as the woman ran deeper into the woods. She thought herself being haunted by her dead aunt. She knelt to the ground, crying, hiding her face, losing sight of someone she truly loved.

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Comments (14)
  • Tigergirl23 on Nov 18, 2010

    This story getting good. Keeping going.

  • webseowriters on Nov 18, 2010

    An excellent share

  • RoeHill on Nov 18, 2010

    Great post.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 18, 2010

    good installment!

  • Mr.Reggie on Nov 18, 2010

    Excellent Write

  • albert1jemi on Nov 18, 2010

    great share

  • Thomas Hodge on Nov 20, 2010

    excellent series.

  • mayweather on Nov 21, 2010

    simply better and better

  • Bruce Officer on Dec 6, 2010

    I’m struggling to keep track of the different characters, but then I don’t really know the background to this fantasy milieu. Enjoying it, though. Great first chapter.

  • Greg Miller on Dec 7, 2010

    So may people loved

    I think you meant “many”

    hope this helps.

  • Greg Miller on Dec 7, 2010

    Fun stuff. I enjoyed reading. Jumped right in the middle pof your stuff to get a feel. Will hop once more and then try to find the beginning. :)

  • Lady Bumblebee on Dec 10, 2010

    I’m loving this story I must know what happens….I’m going to read on.

  • Halima Salat on Dec 17, 2010

    The story is getting more captivating…..Am hooked, reading on….

  • intern abroad on Nov 19, 2011

    Multiple characters make the story all the more interesting.

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