Comments on: The Drive

By: marlenerami26

marlenerami26 — Mon, 28 Sep 2009 22:58:40 +0000

Very well-written piece. I truly enjoyed reading it. I am sorry for the disappointments that you faced along the way, but like you said you didn’t break and I am sure that you are a lot stronger in character.

By: jesse lennon

jesse lennon — Thu, 27 Aug 2009 20:45:54 +0000

Getting through the first three paragraphs,I didn’t know what you were talking about,but I read more and understood where the story is going and the feeling it posses.

By: dmccusker11

dmccusker11 — Tue, 25 Aug 2009 00:33:22 +0000

I really enjoyed reading this piece of yours.. great descriptions and very well written!

By: Emma Green

Emma Green — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 18:47:31 +0000

I really enjoyed reading this piece, I definately think you should progress with it and turn into a novel for sure. It was such a great write, well done

By: Sir Poetry

Sir Poetry — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 00:18:21 +0000

This is fantastic. Thank you for sharing this work. It is a very good read.

By: goodselfme

goodselfme — Fri, 22 May 2009 03:00:44 +0000

You are a true Pioneer, my friend. Well stated and shared.

By: writergirl77

writergirl77 — Sat, 09 May 2009 13:47:06 +0000

This is beautiful.. love your work

By: starrlove9

starrlove9 — Tue, 07 Apr 2009 14:16:10 +0000

This was so good!
It makes you stop and reflect on where your coming from and heading off to a new set of experiences.
Loved it

tina

By: Denise Kawaii

Denise Kawaii — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 17:25:01 +0000

I also have had several moments of starting over in my life, and the feeling of relief is just as you described. Bravo!

By: alexis hampton

alexis hampton — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 12:59:28 +0000

I thought I would never get to the bottom! Wow! What great reviews. I agree, agree, agree. I left a hell too! Elating! You inspire me. Words can not express how much. You opened another closed door to those awful locked doors in the abyss of my subject of consciousness. Thanks a million. love it!!