All about conquering fear, not being afraid to succeed.

Walking towards the gates you realized you were alone.Mama always told you that once you make you’re on your own. The paths getting thinner, your hearts beating faster. Now you begin to wonder is this the happily ever after. Things begin to change. Your thoughts make you second guess your visual range. Your start hearing voices call your name. You have conquered pride, now you have fear to tame. Your mind flashes back to when you were a kid. Even then you knew but you kept it all hid. Your steps are getting shorter and shorter. It seems like the voices are getting louder and louder. The moment is here for you to choose, failure or success. In need of help to pass this test. You remember someone who had strength, heart and will. So you take a knee for prayer and you take the field.

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  • Emma Green on Sep 22, 2009

    an enjoyable piece!

  • Olivia Van Logum on Oct 10, 2009

    Really enjoyed your poem!

  • Sabrina on Oct 19, 2009

    Great job capturing the anticipation!

  • Sabrina on Oct 19, 2009

    Great job capturing the anticipation!

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