He walked alone and cried for days only to fall asleep and arise towards another day of sorrow.

He walked and ran to his past loves home to see if she still wanted a friendly companion to converse apon and so he spoke “fogive for my hanis acts apon your feelings my blinded view of inconsiderate hardships were lashed out apon the wrong being”she spoke nothing and embraced him with a feeling of false forgiveness , but he did not realise this and so he cried . Several moons passed on…the man walked,the peasants pointed in mockery but spoke only under a silent tongue. He realised there was something wrong and it was pointed out a false accusation the brissled ink apon paper speaking of lies “YOU ARE A SINNER AND ACT APON ADULTERY TO SATISFY YOUR GREEDY AND LUSTFULL VICE” the man was shocked for he has not commited these actions of selfishness and insabordinate satisfaction. At first he faked a smile and threw in a light chuckle only to throw off some of his peers,but to the worst extent he was infuriated he did not know who was spreading these false words but he ran into his past love and spoke of her companions speaking these lies the man was infuriated threatening to kill one of them she pleaded to stop and so he left with an eyrus of pure blood red,but those red eyes showed him a pattern they did not know him why would they speak this the answer… they would’nt…it was her and so on she faked a friendship only to betray the man. and as the truth showered down and he hexed and hated her he felt a feeling of rebirth walking alone the sunlight he shunns gleamed apon him only for second people saw him as a god his hair waved in the wind,his eyes glowed radiantly,a smile apon his face,and his head Stood high. He saw something falling it landed right into his arms a woman “couldn’t be”she was beautiful a golden halo tainted with innocense blue eyes that he could drowned in only in his sleep has he seen someone this beautiful she was crying her past love has broken her wings thus she spoke”i am an angel ive watched over you for quite sometime now but i could’nt take waiting for you to pass on so I may see you the man fell in love with the fallen angel and so on they lived in harmony then her wings grew back but she cut them off and spoke only this”I have found peace not in paradise but on the earth so here I shall stat forever….

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  • Devio9 on Apr 3, 2010

    Before submitting writing, I suggest you do a grammar/ spell check, as the run-on sentences are just scratching at my brain.

  • Skout on May 27, 2010

    The typos and bad grammar are a bit much.

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