He walked alone and cried for days only to fall asleep and arise towards another day of sorrow.

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  • Devio9 on Apr 3, 2010

    Before submitting writing, I suggest you do a grammar/ spell check, as the run-on sentences are just scratching at my brain.

  • Skout on May 27, 2010

    The typos and bad grammar are a bit much.

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