Nothing from nothing?

The ultimate Evolution

Before the conception of time, before there was the need to measure the interlude between coming and goings of happenings, because there were no happenings, no traceable activity. There was only vast voids, never ending nothingness, and eternal emptiness.

The void was so dense and compact that it began to sag in on itself . And pockets of pressure collapsed in on each other. And these pockets of immense pressure created friction. And the friction created energy.

So, through uncountable spances there came to be here and there within the void sub microscopic orbs of pure energy created by the immense pressure of the sagging vastness. Over more spances some of these orbs began to crash into each other creating larger and larger orbs and shards of pure unmolested energy. Over an unimaginable duration the merging of these orbs and shards created an existence.

At first the exisistence was just a mass of pulsing and flowing energy that stretched out across the void as it grew and grew and grew. Then the pulsing centralized to the center of this massive existence and brought a systematic rhythm to the amassing. So all internally incubating and externally collecting was the mass, that it began to manufacture more energy for itself from within itself. After many more spances the existence developed a consciousness.

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 26, 2009

    Very creative and well written and unusual.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 26, 2009

    totally unusual, i agree with diamond

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 26, 2009

    Sounds good.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 27, 2009

    A very interesting and unusual read

  • Jane Jane on Nov 27, 2009

    nice read.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 27, 2009

    As most of said..it’s unusual one..

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Nov 29, 2009

    Your creativity is evident, but energy cannot have consciousness, however, the processes leading to the explosion of the first atomic bomb proves that matter (atoms) can be turned into energy,and the existence of the sun (one big atom bomb) proves that the universe can produce systematic processes envolving energy….And I’m betting there are processes out there which can turn energy into matter (And so now you know how the earth and planets came about). but consciousness, my friend, is the side effect of the many biological neurons of the brain which has evolved as the most effective means yet of being able to detect pain and danger in the bid for survival.

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