Hold me evermore in your sweet warmth…

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She lets out a soft gasp, as he pulls her close, into his muscular arms. She feels his strong heartbeat, as if it were her very own, filling her with joy. His warmth embraces her, leaving her thoroughly intoxicated, delirious with love.

She could not believe this was happening!

Hwang had always been a stoic man, rarely showing any emotion. He was always cool under fire, calm as the moon in the night sky. Mina likened him to a chiseled sculpture: beautiful to behold, but rather impassive and serene, evermore composed and collected. He kept his feelings in check, always hidden. Mina longed to break that serenity, to crack that placidity of his. She wanted to release that fire she saw in his smoldering eyes. If only she could touch him some how…touch his heart, touch his spirit. She yearned to touch his bare flesh, feel the fire underneath his skin. She wanted to set him free.

But here he was, holding her, holding her so close in a gentle, unrelenting embrace. Contentment envelops them in palpable silence. No words needed to be spoken…no words necessary. She clings to him, holding on tighter, her pounding heart overflowing. This was something she dreamed about every night, being cradled by him, by his loving arms. She felt a hand upon her head as she buried her face on the warm crook of his neck. Hwang was so warm – so very, very warm – his heat entwining around her. She felt his breath hot upon her cheek, eliciting a blush, letting herself get lost in him. She surrendered her inhibitions, putting her trust in him. Her very life was in his arms…and there was no other place she wanted to be.

Hold me evermore in your embrace
Let the world around us fade away
As our two souls slowly entwine…

Your hand straying into my hair
As I breathe into your neck
Clinging to you in desperation…

Lost forever more in your warmth
Thoroughly rapt within your presence

Hanging on to your every breath…

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  • drelayaraja on Nov 25, 2009

    Very well written.

  • ken bultman on Nov 25, 2009

    How Mina loves her man. How I hope it is reciprocal. Only a compassionate writer holds the key. My judgment is the key will fit. Another wonderful chapter of what has become the story of my favorite couple.

  • Michael Eboh on Nov 25, 2009

    Cool and lovely. I like it.

  • Atanacio on Nov 25, 2009

    Sunshine this saga was indeed well worth the read thank you for sharing it Frank :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 25, 2009

    A very romantic and beautifully written piece.

    Christine

  • cebuanaeyez on Nov 25, 2009

    It is getting hot in here! Full of romance and passion!

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 25, 2009

    good writing style

  • cardy on Nov 25, 2009

    I really enjoyed the read a hot write!!

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 25, 2009

    Very lovely and passionate writing. It is always such a delight to read these pieces from you.

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 25, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, Mina and Hwang, my two favorite people, they have such love and compassion for each other.

  • Teves on Nov 26, 2009

    Great post sunshine…..

  • Yovita Siswati on Nov 26, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Hansika on Nov 26, 2009

    nice

  • giftarist on Nov 26, 2009

    Great work!

  • AlmaG on Nov 27, 2009

    That’s a lovely post! The pic reminds me of Fushigi Yugi ^_^

  • lillyrose on Nov 27, 2009

    That is a very romantic post there! lovely to go with your beautiful smile!

  • deep blue on Nov 28, 2009

    Everybody needs some warmth this winter. Provocative lines which generate heat is something rarely done having the majority caught up with the actual thing. Thanks for sharing some warmth with these lines my friend.

  • Themax on Nov 28, 2009

    That’s very beautiful share Lady Sunshine,Thank you :)

  • lovely honey on Nov 30, 2009

    let the ladys sunshines\’

    warmth embrace us all

    amen

    gr88888888

  • Goodselfme on Dec 1, 2009

    Beautifully penned piece.TX for sharing.

  • Linda Lori on Dec 2, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • T. S. GARP on Dec 5, 2009

    Very deep and full of passion! Great write!

  • Jane Jane on Dec 5, 2009

    what can I say. Simply lovely.

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 8, 2009

    Beautiful

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 1, 2011

    Yes, this is well written and I think it capures the essence of young, romantic love.

  • sandhee on Feb 2, 2011

    yup you made it well..I like the picture

  • Goodselfme on Feb 2, 2011

    Returning as invited on 2/2/11.WEll done.

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Feb 3, 2011

    This is exceptional work. I want to break down Hwang’s walls too. lol. Beautiful and romantic.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 4, 2011

    This is a lovely and romantic poem.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 5, 2011

    Romantic and well written.

  • Starpisces on Apr 28, 2011

    very well written one again, cool one.
    :)

  • Erin Miller on Apr 28, 2011

    I can’t decide! I like both! Keep writing both!

  • sloanie on Apr 28, 2011

    It’s from your heart, Excellent I,ll say no more.

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