More than a timepiece, it is The Watch.

“It’s about the watch, isn’t it? Hasn’t it always been about the watch? You have it there, splayed out with its alligator bands, just like new, except for that impression across that one particular hole, so well preserved, mocking me. When hasn’t it been about the watch? Precious thing. More important than anything, anyone, else. The watch. Now here, of all places, sitting on that dark golden oak table; the color of which can only be achieved though age, sits the watch. Timeless. Ticking. Tormenting. The audacity of having it there, sitting in the fading sun. Glistening. You know I can’t keep my eyes off it, the watch. When will it be over? Ever? How can anything physical have so much meaning? Here, I pace around this vast hollow, damp room, and there it is. Why? Why place it there? Why isn’t it where I’ve seen it all my life? Why have it in this room, on this table, today? Of all things in my life, that I’ll remember the most is the watch. Watching the watch. Being told about the watch. Story after story about the watch. I want to smash it. Is that why it is here? A test? A test of my resolve against the watch? You know it represents so much more than a timepiece. The watch. It is all your life lessons distilled into a single mechanical possession. A history book, of sorts. Here in this timeless room, the watch. I will not give you what you seek. I will not release my own traits. You can keep it. The watch.”

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  • Rask Balavoine on Dec 1, 2008

    I’m intrigued. Glad you didn’t resolve all the questions it raises for me, but left me wondering, letting my mind pursue a variety of possibilities.

  • Jasin on Dec 1, 2008

    We all get lost in time, unless we slow things down and enjoy life.

  • working stiff on Dec 1, 2008

    Nice… can’t really assume anything, makes you think of your own ‘Watch’

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 1, 2008

    this is a very interesting subject matter,it makes one to take a pause and wonder

  • joystick7 on Dec 3, 2008

    Good stuff!

  • Launie and Melynda Sorrels on Dec 7, 2008

    This looks like it is written by someone who values time. Can time itself be damaging? a threat? To some it is. And to those the watch can be an enemy or an ally.

  • triondmobile on Jan 8, 2009

    Great stuff!

  • LewSethics on Jun 26, 2010

    This one only gets one hand clapping, I think. Intriguing but incomplete. peace

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