It was all because of a coin in my shoe.

When I go on a 2 week holiday my feet always hurt because I am walking more than usual. More often than not ill even get blisters and they are painful and annoying. However one day after having a shower I felt my foot hurting and thought oh no I have a blister coming on. Fortunately after checking it was not a blister it appeared to be nothing much at all just some hard skin. However my foot was still hurting at nighttimes and walking around was painful. This went on for a few days and it was a relief to sit down in the nightspot and take the weight off my feet. Just at the end of the first week I was in the nightspot and for some reason decided to take off my shoe and found a 20 pence piece in my right shoe. All this time I was in discomfort it was not because of all the walking I had done it was because my foot was pressing on a 20p coin in my shoe. I was so relieved to take it out and after that my feet were fine for the rest of the holiday. So words of advice if your feet are hurting check your shoes you never know what might be in them.

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  • Adrn0919 on Oct 8, 2010

    That was cute. I hope your not offended, I really liked the way the story was written.

  • Louise Silver on Oct 9, 2010

    Haha its happened to us all at sometime or other! Its true though, it can take a while for us to notice the obvious.

  • Ethics0006 on Oct 9, 2010

    Nice Work

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