The mind-boggling ideas came up. Feelings that you cannot estimate neither comprehend pop-ups in this twirling end- an untitled poem.

To all the chase,
I reprimand another taste
Once we caught each other in a race,
the probability was just frail.

Seeking through the shadows
and vague silhouettes
That undermine our hostile faces
Leaks the doomed, fancy cases

Coincidence knocks us all over
Torching us to open mild covers
Yet I break the slightest rules-
thus, my windows see you through.

If only my photographic memory
recreates a genuine picturesque,
I’ll entail the silly curves of your image
And carve it on a narra tree.

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Comments (10)
  • papaleng on Jul 1, 2010

    beautiful and with good flow.

  • giftarist on Jul 1, 2010

    I like this. Glad to hear from you back!

  • drelayaraja on Jul 10, 2010

    Wonderful :)

  • drelayaraja on Jul 10, 2010

    Wonderful share :)

  • yes me on Jul 12, 2010

    LIKED IT CHEERS

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 12, 2010

    Exceptional work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Tulan on Jul 12, 2010

    good share,

  • T. S. GARP on Jul 13, 2010

    Nicely done!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 17, 2010

    I like it.

  • lucia anna on Jul 28, 2010

    Excellent

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