I hate Wal-Mart – here is why.

 Wal-Mart is the devil.  I have seen this wretched store since I was like 10 yrs old. At least that is the first horrible memory of it.  That place has been growing ever since then. You can do just about anything at Wal-Mart these days.  But the sad sad truth is that Wal-Mart is the devil.  It comes into town, with the lowest prices it can muster because they can accept the potential profits Versus the loss they will suffer while there evil plan is carried out.  Meanwhile the small businessman in town are trying to match them, going deeper into debt, until finally they have to shut down.  Step1 has been done.  Then Wal-Mart will raise there prices all the way up, and there the only game in town. So we have no choice but to go there. Step 2 is done.  Step three is to then drive us insane with long waits and under trained staff that don’t know where things are. Step 3 is complete.  It’s simple. It’s evil.  That concludes it. Wal-Mart is the devil.

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  • cardy on Aug 28, 2009

    I found this funny and well written it made me think of my own superstore and having been draged there with my parents now i shop there myself because its the only one around for miles.

  • Payge on Aug 28, 2009

    I think every place of business has its pros and cons we all have to live with.It seems everything is high now a days no matter where you go. Where I work is ran totally backwards with some bad conditions but are ranking in the money.Small business are closing because they cant compete and the economy is not helping.So its just not Wal Mart,its a wide spread situation we all have to deal with.The long lines dont really bother me, Im usually plotting my next story or article.

  • ichyru rouge on Aug 28, 2009

    haha that was beautiful

  • Marie Milton on Aug 28, 2009

    I thought Tesco was bad enough : )

  • BJ Abadam on Aug 29, 2009

    I agree

  • Shamanz on Sep 1, 2009

    nicely written mate fun, and interesting.

  • xoxo on Nov 29, 2009

    Lol.. Nice.. Very nice :)

  • Billyfnstacy on Nov 30, 2009

    Good job man. Creative and funny. OMG!!! I hope its not true!!!

  • clay hurtubise on Dec 10, 2009

    lol, my sentiments exactly! You should watch the Walmart Documentary, scary!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Lady Fantasy on May 17, 2010

    A sign of the times I think..the little guys go down while the bigger guys get all the glory.I dont go to Wal Mart unless I really have to but my roommate swears by it.My sentiments exactly here….great work.

  • EricPinola on May 18, 2010

    There are the crazy looking people who shop there though!

    Have you ever seen the video that shows the locations growing? Look up the expansion of walmart video…or something..

    EP

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