Weeping woman, oh if he only knew.

As she wept
The tears streaming down her face,
Coming as a waterfall,
Spraying mist where it dares.
The water droplets landing free,
Without a care.
Not knowing why they drop.
The polka-dot shaped puddles lying on the sheets.
The sound of sirens louder than any thought,
Reverberating off the walls.
The sound carrying into the thin wallpaper,
Soaking through to the next room.
In that room stood a man.
Angrily throwing his things into a bag.
Not even caring to use a suitcase,
Just wanting to leave.
There were no reasons, no questions, and no answers.
The slam of a door causing her to rise.
The clear glass of the window,
Sun shining through not realizing it should be hiding behind a cloud.
What are you doing sun, don’t you realize this is a sad moment.
Where is the rain when you need it, when you call for it, when you so desperately hope for it?
Engine roaring to life, tires on pavement squealing.
He left her there,
Left her to her thoughts.
Never speaking again, never pondering one another, he would never know.
Able to keep the secret that belonged to her alone.
Unfound for weeks,
The smell of rotting flesh seeping through the siding brought them in to find her.
Limp, lifeless, hanging by a cord.

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Comments (4)
  • Cutealice on Mar 2, 2010

    Nice one

  • Peter Cimino on Mar 2, 2010

    Well done!

  • S A JOHNSON on Mar 30, 2010

    Wow. At first I thought that this was just a normal “sad” love story (even though it is sad) but wow, great job. I really enjoyed reading it.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 21, 2010

    Oh my God…

    This almost brought me to tears.

    I am pretty open about the clinical depression I contend with. I am the poster child for the depressed and sensitive person that people think of poets as ,

    Its funny too, because I look like I would snap someone’s neck at least until they get to know me. It bothers me too that but in a way its a protection.

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