I see many things in nature,it symbolizes parts of your life.

I see a tree all fluffy and green
it represents fulfillment and success
I see a tree in the autumn shedding it leaves
that to thee is time for change,exploring other things
I see rain cleansing whats not to be
As if it’s washing all the waste away
I see snow and think of purity
It’s sparkle diamond specs through out
it has you wondering what ugliness hides beneath
I look at the moon and feel as if its a crystal ball
Therefore it makes me think intensely about my life
Half or full it seems mystical to thee
The stars represent reaching my goals and that there is no limit
The ocean most powerful of all relating to the moon
It is captivating and has smooth sailing and rough riding
The ocean can be calm or in an uproar
I see this as emotions
nature has a mind of its own,so why cant we
See what you see,next time nature has its way
think about what I say ,if you may

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  • BC Doan on Sep 28, 2008

    Beautiful ways to look at life! Very nice..

  • Amit G on Sep 30, 2008

    Wicked visualization!

  • geri on Sep 30, 2008

    Hi interesting poem gabbi ‘Nature has a mind of its own’ has set me thinking

  • josh utley on Oct 1, 2008

    that’s the most beautiful poem of yours that i’ve read yet. i loved it.

  • mdegenhardt on Oct 2, 2008

    Yes, we can learn so much about ourselves and others from responding to nature. There is so much comparison and beauty to draw from. Wonderful use of imagery to convey the sentiment of this write. Nicely done my friend and neighbor. ~ Michael

  • Fabian C on Oct 6, 2008

    This is magic representation of life. Shakespeare thought that seasons were gods way of expressing his emotions. The images are just right. Keep it up!

  • PR Mace on Nov 19, 2008

    We all see different things. I like what you see in nature. This is your read forward for tonight.

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