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What You Took

Reilley on Apr 3, 2009
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Is what I will never get back.


My blood floods from my shoes,
The pain is real.
The mist – all that remains of my aura -
Reeks of prison air.

The very old need a bed of their own
To die in.
I will not know until the very end
What you took.

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  • Joie Schmidt on Apr 3, 2009

    This is quite powerful – - beautiful – - strong poetry*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Mary Contrary on Apr 3, 2009

    Very Strong & Powerful! Good Stuff!

  • Tarra Buluran on Apr 3, 2009

    It’s sad yet artistic way of expressing oneself beautifully.

  • Evelyn Moore on Apr 4, 2009

    Profound

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 6, 2009

    a nice way to express your thoughts in a vivid way.

  • Aauhein on Apr 9, 2009

    Chilling.

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