Oh the feelings I know very well. Great ending. TX

rhodetirao, what a meaningful reflection on emotions you have penned here. I commend you for a job well done. Thank You for sharing this with us all and for being the creative person you are…

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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haaa i like to play cricket

It sure is very powerful and emotional alright..although im not emo i still love this type of writing.

wow, great poem.

I like this poem

very nice

Very dark. Every feeling is so true. I LOVE IT. Keep writing!

Also can you see my post, Too Late. I have 2. Look at both. They’re the same, except one is longer. When I try to erased it, my computer freezes. So I left both. Tell me what do you think of it.

Also. Nice writing.

I liked the depth of your emotions reflected.

I can relate,great poem.

emm.. broken heart, poem about broken heart is always touching emotion..

very deep indeed …check my article…suggestions/feedback are welcome
http://authspot.com/thoughts/the-world-of-dreams-2/

v.wel done! short but beautifuly described the pain…. =(

Many of us struggle with our emotions and really find it difficult to express especially on a personal level. Beautifully put.

Hi emo, Great job well done regards Mikey.

Reflects the great problem of humanity…

You’d think our alienation would unite us