I cry many times
Because of You

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  • Goodselfme on Dec 1, 2009

    Oh the feelings I know very well. Great ending. TX

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 10, 2009

    rhodetirao, what a meaningful reflection on emotions you have penned here. I commend you for a job well done. Thank You for sharing this with us all and for being the creative person you are…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Rose2798 on Dec 13, 2009


  • Kevin Petersen on Jan 13, 2010

    haaa i like to play cricket

  • Lailas on Apr 24, 2010

    It sure is very powerful and emotional alright..although im not emo i still love this type of writing.

  • Netty net on Apr 29, 2010

    wow, great poem.

  • Netty net on Apr 29, 2010

    I like this poem

  • Ellie. on Jun 11, 2010

    very nice

  • massimo2020 on Aug 26, 2010

    Very dark. Every feeling is so true. I LOVE IT. Keep writing!

    Also can you see my post, Too Late. I have 2. Look at both. They’re the same, except one is longer. When I try to erased it, my computer freezes. So I left both. Tell me what do you think of it.

    Also. Nice writing.

  • sandyheart on Nov 3, 2010

    I liked the depth of your emotions reflected.

  • 2brnt2b on Dec 17, 2010

    I can relate,great poem.

  • Kaos Anak on May 23, 2011

    emm.. broken heart, poem about broken heart is always touching emotion..

  • Apostle of Flamboyancy on May 30, 2011

    very deep indeed …check my article…suggestions/feedback are welcome

  • M.S on Jul 26, 2011

    v.wel done! short but beautifuly described the pain…. =(

  • Anna Storer on Oct 18, 2011

    Many of us struggle with our emotions and really find it difficult to express especially on a personal level. Beautifully put.

  • m1j2k3 on Jan 2, 2012

    Hi emo, Great job well done regards Mikey.

  • Cheyenne on Mar 24, 2012

    Reflects the great problem of humanity…

    You’d think our alienation would unite us

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